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The maps delineate the future development plan of an industial area in the town of Norbiton.

Overall, this area will undergo significant changes, including turning all factory lands into housing, with diverse but esstential infrastructures facilities.

This area is surrounded by a river in the north and a main road in the south. Initially, it consists of a circulated cross road linked to the southern main road, extending a staight street toward east. All the factory buildings will be demolished. Some shops and a medical centre will be built in the south-west and south-east corner of the cross road, respectively. A playground and a school are also planned in the north and east of the street. The other empty areas along the street are designed for housing purpose.

At the same time, another short street extending toward north-west of the cross road will be developed, surrounding with houses. Besides, a bridge will be constructed across the river, connecting the cross road and northern farmland, to provide more housing land for this area. Moreover, the entry spot of this area from the main road to the will be upgraded.

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The maps show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton at present and how it is planned to be redeveloped in the future.

Overall, the factories will be completely replaced by residential buildings, together with a range of supporting facilities, and the area will be physically extended across the river to the north.

At the moment, the site is occupied almost entirely by factories arranged around a roundabout, which is connected to a main road to the south. A single road runs east from the roundabout, and a river forms the northern boundary of the area, separating it from open farmland.

Under the proposed plan, houses will line both the existing eastern road and a new road leading northwest from the roundabout. Around this junction, several public amenities will be added, including shops to the southwest and a medical centre to the southeast. A playground will be located just north of the eastern road, with a school further to the east. In addition, a bridge will be built over the river, giving access to the farmland, where another residential neighbourhood is planned. The entrance from the main road will also be upgraded.

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The two maps illustrate the existing Norbiton industrial site and its proposed redevelopment in the future.

Overall, the area will undergo a comprehensive transformation from an entirely industrial zone into a modern residential community, with the addition of various public amenities and an expansion northward across the river.

Currently, the site is bordered by farmland to the north, separated by a river, and accessed from a main road to the south leading to the town. A central roundabout connects to an eastbound street, and the entire area is occupied by factories arranged around the roundabout and along this street.

According to the future plan, all factories will be demolished. The roundabout will be retained, but its southwest and southeast corners will be redeveloped into shops and a medical centre. The former eastern street will now feature a school on its north side and a playground on its south side, with housing lining both sides. Additionally, a new road will extend northeast from the roundabout, crossing the river via a bridge to connect with the northern farmland, where further housing will be built. The southern entrance from the town road will also be upgraded.

In summary, the redevelopment will replace industry with housing and essential facilities, while also expanding residential space northward across the river.

地图题常见道路表达（速查版）：

• 十字路口: crossroads / intersection / junction
• T 字路口: T-junction
• 环形路口/转盘: roundabout
• 在路的尽头: at the end of the road
• 死胡同: dead end street
• 在……对面: opposite
• 从 A 通向 B: a road runs / leads from A to B
• 连接 A 和 B: connect A and B / provide access to
• 在路北侧：on north side of the road
• 在路两旁：on both sides of the road

道路：

• highway / expressway
• main road / secondary road
• street
• footpath

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The maps illustrate an industrial area in the town of Norbiton at present and how it is planned to be developed in the future.

Overall, all factories will be replaced by residential buildings, with a variety of supporting facilities, and the range will be extended across the river to open farmland in the north.

Initially, this area is surrounded by a river in the north and a main road in the south. It consists of a roundabout linking the southern main road, and a street running toward east, giving access to the factories.

Under the proposed plan, all the factory buildings will be demolished. In their place, shops and a medical centre will be placed in the south-west and south-east corner of the roundabout, respectively. A playground and a school will also be built in the north and east edges of the street. The land along this street will be allocated for housing.
Additionally, a short street in the north-west of the roundabout will be developed to provide more residential buildings. Besides, a bridge will be constructed across the river, creating another neighbourhood in the northern farmland. Moreover, the entrance of this area from the main road will be upgraded.

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The maps shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton at present and how it will be redeveloped in the future.

Overall, this area will undergo a significant upgrade, replacing all factories into residential housing with different supplement facilities, and expanding the area to northern open farm land.

Initially, the area is surrounded by a river in the north and a main road running to the town in the south. There is a roundabout in the center of this area, with a street heading toward east. The factories lie along the roundabout and the both sides of the street.

Under the development plan, all the factories will be demolished. The southwest and southeast corner of the roundabout will be replaced by shops and a medical centre. Meanwhile, a playground and a school will be built in the north and the east of the old street, with residential buildings filling in the rest part of the street. In addition, a new street running to the northeast corner and a bridge heading to northern farmland will be constructed from the roundabout, providing more housing for this area. Lastly, the entrance of this area from the main road will be upgraded.